Feedback and amendments of Rough Cut

The feedback from my teacher on my rough cut was quite positive. However there is lots of room for improvement.
I will need to add and change the following things to make it better;

• Add a soundtrack to the sequence
• Add in the inter-titles - 'Directed by', 'Produced by', 'Edited by' and 'Starring'
• Add in more SFX
• Shorten the screen time of the 'DEADHOUSE PRODUCTIONS' logo.